{"id":935,"date":"2014-07-06T16:08:24","date_gmt":"2014-07-06T16:08:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/paulinemross.co.uk\/?p=935"},"modified":"2014-07-06T16:08:24","modified_gmt":"2014-07-06T16:08:24","slug":"kallanash-update-final-edits-done","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/paulinemross.co.uk\/index.php\/2014\/07\/kallanash-update-final-edits-done\/","title":{"rendered":"Kallanash update: final edits done"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">I\u2019ve spent the last few weeks feverishly revising \u2018The Plains of Kallanash\u2019 in light of the comments received from my beta readers. And when I say \u2018feverishly\u2019, sometimes it almost felt as if I were literally feverish &#8211; I\u2019d go to bed thinking about edits, I\u2019d wake up thinking about them, and sometimes I even dreamt about them. It was hard work, and a great deal of it was spent, not pecking away at the keyboard, but just mulling over ideas. Not much else got done, although I\u2019ve found that mindless occupations like ironing or gardening are excellent pondering opportunities.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"-qt-block-indent: 0; text-indent: 36px; margin: 0px 0px 5px 0px;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">After the pondering and the final rewriting, I read through the whole book one final time to tighten up excessive wordiness, and looking out for last minute gotchas resulting from the revisions. No use removing that unwanted chunk of text if a different part of the book refers to the missing event. And I found one place where a character had changed gender in the revisions, yet I still had a scene referring to \u2018her\u2019 as \u2018him\u2019. Oops.<\/span><!--more--><\/p>\n<p style=\"-qt-block-indent: 0; text-indent: 36px; margin: 0px 0px 5px 0px;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">So now it\u2019s finished and the manuscript is off to my proofreader for a final polish. This is the most expensive part of my publication costs by quite a margin, but it\u2019s one part that, to my mind, is non-negotiable (along with a professionally-designed cover). I\u2019m reasonably comfortable with my grammar and spelling, but punctuation &#8211; not so much. It\u2019s not that I can\u2019t punctuate correctly, but I need someone to keep my ellipses and dashes in order.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"-qt-block-indent: 0; text-indent: 36px; margin: 0px 0px 5px 0px;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">Am I happy with it? Of course not. Is any writer ever totally happy with their work? And I still have this nagging suspicion at the back of my mind that I\u2019ll publish it in September and the world will fall over laughing at how bad it is. In reality, of course, the world will continue on its merry way, quite oblivious to my book, and after an initial spurt of sales fuelled by friends and relations, the thing will languish at some telephone-number ranking on Amazon, never to be seen again. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"-qt-block-indent: 0; text-indent: 36px; margin: 0px 0px 5px 0px;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">Well, that\u2019s OK. At least it will be out there. And there comes a point with any book where you just have to say: enough! Let\u2019s call it done. There are people who polish and tinker and whittle away for years, decades, sometimes. I don\u2019t have the patience for that. So I\u2019m calling \u2018The Plains of Kallanash\u2019 done, bar the proofreading edits. Come September, it goes out the door, and that\u2019s the end of it.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"-qt-block-indent: 0; text-indent: 36px; margin: 0px 0px 5px 0px;\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Calibri'; font-size: 14pt;\">And so, on to the next one\u2026<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I\u2019ve spent the last few weeks feverishly revising \u2018The Plains of Kallanash\u2019 in light of the comments received from my beta readers. And when I say \u2018feverishly\u2019, sometimes it almost felt as if I were literally feverish &#8211; I\u2019d go to bed thinking about edits, I\u2019d wake up thinking about them, and sometimes I even dreamt about them. It was hard work, and a great deal of it was spent, not pecking away at the keyboard, but just mulling over ideas. Not much else got done, although I\u2019ve found that mindless occupations like ironing or gardening are excellent pondering opportunities. 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